Saturday, 23 January 2010

The Korea grass
behind mountain
burning pampas
(behind mountain
The Korea grass
a mountain,
mountain grass.
Littleleaf.
Korean Mountain.
Korean Mountain.
Korean

feather
While waiting on
Korean Alps
(and mountain
and "Mountain
It is native to
Korean Mountain.
Her works capture the
Korean Mountain.

They had to eat barbecued
Korean Mountain
(behind mountain
burning "grass
The "Korea grass,
PAMPAS.

I go to the
Korean Mountain
I suckle
The Korea grass

2 comments:

Jane said...

Aahhhhhh I love this, especially all of stanza 2.

Also, don't think I didn't notice that you changed your fish. BECAUSE I DID. LAST NIGHT. While skyping Audra. You can ask her.

menstrous said...

no one doubts your dedication to my fish, Jane.

I like stanza 2 too, but I feel like it fizzles in stanza 3. I never know how to end things.